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th words congealed on our lip To translate the emotion in these two verses，we must grasp the psychological condition of the poet. Looking at each other ‘s tearful eyes with hand connecting, they would like to say something, yet speechless for sobbing finally. “执手”“相看”“泪眼”“无语凝噎” are a succession of words describing the hero’s sorrow and the grief, Xu Yuanchong uses‘gaze at’and‘tearful eyes’to describe the mood, and transmit the emotion, ‘burst into’ indicates the eruption of his preserved sentiment, ‘congealed’ vividly manifest the sadness. Obviously, in version A ‘wet with tears’ greatly weakens the emotion and cannot transmit artistic conception of the original poem. Obviously, it is inadequate to only display the content, we also should express the feelings between the lines properly. For example: 多情自古伤离别，更那堪、冷落清秋节 That is to say, people always feel sad when parting since the ancient times. How does a lonely person live in this chilly autumn? Here the poet is displaying a kind of disconsolate mood. A ever have people hated leaving there friends, and now the cold autumn with its sadness on top of it all; B Lovers would grieve at parting as of old. How could you stand this clear autumn day so cold Compared with ‘hated’, ‘grieve’in B indicates that the poet feels brokenhearted, the rhetorical question corresponds the original poem expressing the psychology of sad feeling in the lonely autumn, which conformed to the artistic conception of the original poem. Obviously, B is more successful in transmitting artistic conception. A does not display the emotion, therefore it fails in the transmission of artistic conception, but, XuYuanchong fully comprehends the poet’s emotion of Bells Ringing In The Rain, and carries on the poet’s sorrow by choosing the words. Finally he succeeds in the transmission of artistic conception. Transmission of artistic conception is closely linked with the emotion transmission. So we can make conclusion from the examples above, the transference of artistic conception is incomplete, if there is emotion in an original poem, but the translation fails to manifest the feelings in the verses,. In order to further the understanding the importance of emotion expression in translation, the author would like to give more examples: “晓镜但愁云鬓改，夜吟应觉月光寒。” （To One Unnamed） by Li Shangyin）The poem describes the immortal love: he cannot help thinking of his beloved for his deep love to her so that he does not see his image but that of his beloved while looking into the mirror. The two lines selected in the poem describe the feeling: the poet worries about his beloved’s gray hair on head but not his own when he is looking into the mirror, he does not feel the chill of moonlight, but he worries that she will feel cold when he is crooning verse at night. The following are two kinds of translations of Innes Herdan(A) and Xu Yuanchong(B) A Grief at the morning mirror--- Cloud –like-hair must change; Verses hummed at night, Feeling the chill of moonlight… B At dawn I’m grieved to think your mirrored hair turns grey; At night you would feel cold while I croon by moonlight. A describes the poet’s worries about his own gray hair, and he feels chill, which is the literal translation without understanding the feeling of the poet to his beloved. So it fails to transmit that kind of sentiment in the poem and reveal the immoral love. Xu yuanchong adds person to describe the immoral love, t