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How many blossoms fell during the storm[（4）Dawn in Spring([11 Tr.John Turner)How suddenly the morning comes in SpringS On everyside you can hear the sweet birdssing.Last night amidst the storm--Ah,who cantellYWith wind and rain,how many blossoms fellY （5）A Spring Morning([11]Tr.Bynner)I awake light-hearted this morning of spring Everywhere,around me the singing of birds But now I remember the night,the storm And I wonder how many blossoms were broken. （6）Spring Dawn([9]孙大雨译)Feeling not when cometh th\'peep of spring dawn,Everywhere birds\'songs I hear in my slumber.Through the sounds of wind and rain all th\'night long,Know I not how many th\'flowers fall in number. （7）The Spring Dawn([11]吴钧陶译)Slumbering,I know not the spring dawn ispeeping,But everywhere the singing birds are cheeping.Last night I heard the rain dripping and wind weeping,How many petals are now on the ground sleepingY （8）Spring Dawn([12]Shil Shun Liu译)I scarcely knew it was dawn, So sound was the sleep of springf Everywhere there was birdsong, All night long was the sough of wind and rainf How many flowers have fallen to the groundY （9）Dawn in Spring([3]倪培龄译)At Dawn I wake up in the spring,And I hear birds on all sides singing.Since it was such a stormy night, Oh,what a flowery-falling sightY （10）A Spring Morning([13]杨纪鹤译)I awake to find the spring morn bright,And hear birds singing all around.Wind and rain was heavy last night,How many flowers fell agroundY （11）Vernal Daybreak([14]黄龙译)My vernal slumber tarries till the break of the day,Everywhere is audible the warbler\'s lay.In the yesternight\'s showery gust,How many flowers,I wonder,have fallen into decayY （12）Spring Dawn([12]Ta Kung Pao译,1979)Sleeping into spring,one hardly knew it\'sdaylight.Birds are heard everywhere trilling. There\'ve been sounds of wind and rain in the night,How many blossoms have been fallingY （13）Spring Dawn①I slept in Spring not conscious of the dawn, But heard the gray birds chattering all around,I remember,there was a storm at night,Pray,how many blossoms have fallen downY （14）Spring Mornings([13]徐忠杰译)One slumbers late in the morning in Spring,Everywhere one hears birds warble or sing.As the night advances,rain spatters,windsmoan,How many flowers have droppedY Can that beknownY 译诗的重要捷径之一是需找到诗的神韵所在———诗眼。原诗中的“啼”是本诗的诗眼，根据对诗眼“啼”的理解的不同，译文可分为三组：（1）、（2）、（3）、这三种译文的意味大同小异，可列为一组，这几位译者的“啼”都是“悲啼”；（4）-（10）是明显的以“啼”为歌；而（11）-（14）这四个译本的“啼”皆以中性词翻译基调也大致相同，并未明确指出是喜还是悲，似乎有 意留空间给读者去想象。诗眼“啼”到底该如何解释呢？本文对以上三类译 文进行了比较分析。第一组译文是从深层来挖掘。诗的意象，独创中有继承，继承中有独创。全诗的另一种意象是花落春残，前三种译文较好地体现了这一情 感。但是，译文选用“crying”一词会强压英文读者接受鸟是在悲鸣的“实”，显得伤感。重要的是，原诗前两句与后两句意境构成一种跌宕的层次，从而表现出诗人复杂的情绪，既喜春又惜春，心绪表达得曲折含蓄。而前三种译文的译者只注重表达诗人的精神感觉，忽略了原诗的写作风格。尽管译文在传递原诗意象及精神方面属上乘之作，但美中不足的是没有了原诗的意味和意境，没能展现出原诗跌宕的层次与复杂的感觉；它只是让读者理解了原诗内容，却没能让读者欣 赏原诗的音美和形美、风格和神韵，得不到原诗的平衡美感，译诗和原诗的“诗味”大不相同。对“啼”的另一种解释是小鸟的欢叫声，鸟儿是在“枝头春意闹”，全诗是“春夜喜雨”，诗文隽永清新。原诗的前两句是描述春天早晨的情景：春眠正酣，早有鸟雀呼晴，催人快起；“处处闻啼鸟”意味着晓与晴，含有喜晴之意。全文是前喜后忧，第二、三组译文可归为此类，尤以第二组见长。 以下是对各个译文的评析：从译诗（1）的后半部来看，翁先生的译文成功地传达了原诗中为花木担忧之情，尤其是结尾部分将原诗作者经风雨而替花愁的情绪表达得十分到位。诗人缘情写景。原诗虽写的是一日之晨，似乎却蕴含着对已到三春之暮的哀怨。“啼鸟”不是在歌唱而是在悲鸣，或者说，诗人听起来是悲鸣。诗人似在自怨自艾，听到的鸟叫也觉得是它们也似乎是在嘲笑自己，似有 “杯弓蛇影”、“风声鹤唳”之嫌？细读翁的译文，读者可能会产生疑问： 译文内容不切。忽略的部分有：首行五字，除“春”字外，其余意思均未译出；后两句的动词“闻”、“知”和第三句的“声”也没有译出；增加的内容如：开篇“Late”一词为原文所无；夜来风雨，何以知天怒而用“fury”？诗人对花落状态未曾明示，“poor dear”这些限定词又从何而来？如果将翁的译文做一个回译，“原文”可为：（首先一声叹息）晚了！今日醒来已晚，可惜春光难挽， 四周鸟咽空啼。昨夜风雨无驻，胜似天公已怒。可怜落红无数！（本文作者译）对比之下，此回译与原文不尽相同。译文形式上更像自由体诗或散文，缺乏格律诗的音乐性和节奏感。如果唐诗都是以这种方式来翻译，恐怕会形成误导——外国读者们会以为这就是享誉世界文学的唐诗的形式。就其诗的“意似”而言，译者做得本论文由英语论文网提供整理，提供论文代写，英语论文代写，代写论文，代写英语论文，代写留学生论文，代写英文论文，留学生论文代写相关核心关键词搜索。