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culars on the annexed specifications, and shall be glad to hear that you are able to complete the same.
译文:兹随函寄上100吨铁条定单一份。条件按附带规格中的具体规定。如贵公司能供货,当不胜感激。(此例,英文是一个句子,里面有一个并列谓语and shall be glad to hear和一个宾语从句that you are able to complete the same。如果将其翻译成一个长句,汉语显得不伦不类,将其分成三个句子处理就顺当得多)。
If the negotiations between the rich nations and the poor nations make headway, it is intended that a ministerial session in December should be arranged.
译文:要是富国和穷国之间的谈判获得进展的话,就打算在12月份安排召开部长级会议。(翻译成表示假设的分句。)

 

4　领会词类转换,把握句子、段落的联系
就句子内部而言,英语重形合,句子各成分联系紧密,汉语重意合,结构松散,更多依赖句内各成分的关系。汉语重视句子间的联系,而英语不太重视句子间的联系。
The economic growth rate has been noticeably affected by the chaotic state of the market.
译文:经济增长的速度受到市场混乱的影响,这是显而易见的。(英语中noticeably是副词,修饰谓语动词affected,翻译时将其当作一个句子来处理反而符合汉语习惯。)
During the half-hour talk, the two sides exchanged views on the choice of terms of payment, but they made no mention of the mode of transportation.
译文:在半小时的商谈中,双方就付款方式交换了意见,但没有提到运输方式。(mention是名词,译成汉语时要变为动词。)
Our terms are cash within three months of date of delivery, orsubjectto5 percent discount if paid within one month.
译文:我公司付款条件为交货后三个月内交付现金。如一个月内付清货款,可打九五折扣。(文中or subject to 5 per cent discount if paid within one month只是全句中的一部分,而if paid within one month实际上是起从句作用,这样安排使句子各成分的内在联系十分紧密。翻译这个句子时,须将其拆成两个句子,因为汉语讲究句子之间的联系。

 

5 适当增词、减词,平衡断句与并句的关系
英汉语句子结构、表达方式、修辞手段不尽相同,所以为使译文更加精练,更符合汉语表达习惯,有时需要省略部分词语;而有时为了使译文更清楚,可按意义、修辞和句法的需要在译文中加入原文无其词而有其意的词,使译文更加通达。同时也可将原文的一句话分成几句,或根据具体情况把两句话合成一句,及将原文的顺序作适当的调整,这样做的目的是使译文的意思完整准确。
We are pleased to have received your invitation to the symposium on Internet.
译文:非常高兴收到了参加因特网会议的邀请。(省去代词“我们”)
Perhaps you have overlooked the fact that your account for July purchases has not yet been settle.
译文:也许您忘了七月份购货帐还没有结算。(名词fact不译出)
This year the export quantity of black tea increased by 20 percent, and jasmine tea by 30 percent.
译文:今年红茶的出口量增加了20%,花茶的出口量增加了30%。(增加动词)
All preparation must be done well before you sign a contact。
译文:在签合同之前,准备工作都必须作
好。(增加名词)
We have handled textiles for more than 30 years.
译文:我公司经营各种纺织品已有30多年。(增补表示复数概念的词)
The problem whether the quality of the products is up to requirement has not been settled.
译文:产品质量是否合乎要求这个问题尚未解决。(把同位语从句提到the problem前)
But considered realistically, we had to face the fact that our products were less than good.
译文:但是现实地考虑一下,我们不得不正视这样的事实:我们的产品并不理想。(增补冒号将同位语从句分开处理)
The government tried unsuccessfully to curb inflation throughout the country.
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