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4.3 Editing ............................ 21

Chapter Five Conclusion ............................ 35

Chapter Four Case Analysis

4.1 Adding

The technique of addition involves augmenting the source material with supplementary information. It can be divided into three kinds: explanations, evaluations and expansions. Explanation refers to illustrating some parts of the original works, including providing explanations for allusions, ancient meanings (in modern ways), words and content, difficult points, and so on. Evaluation on the content of a translation, while expansions involve the insertion of pertinent material that enriches the translation (“Seven Variational Techniques” 94). These methodologies are particularly useful when the target readers might not possess the cultural context or specialized knowledge to fully grasp the source text. 

Example 1:

Source Text: Here we visited the old tower where Marshal Bazaine① got over the stone wall② , the cell in which the prisoner of the Iron Mask③ resided, and the old Spanish well dating from the eleventh century. (Appendix 42)

Initial Version: 在那里，我们参观了巴赞元帅翻越石墙的古塔，关押铁面人的牢房，以及可以追溯到十一世纪的西班牙水井。

Revised Version: 在那里，我们参观了巴赞元帅①越狱②的古塔，关押神秘铁面人③的牢房，以及可以追溯到十一世纪的西班牙水井。(Appendix 43) 

Chapter Five Conclusion

In grappling with the challenges of translation through practical experience, the translator has come to appreciate the demanding nature of a translator’s craft. This translation practice has not only honed the translator’s skill, but also fostered a sense of perseverance, from which the translator has derived significant benefit. In this concluding part, the translator will discuss the insights gained and the limitations encountered during this process.

First and foremost, the translator has realized the crucial role of target readers. The translator must balance the original author’s intention, with the needs and preferences of the target readers, which is pivotal for enhancing communication efficiency. 

Additionally, the translator has realized the value of thorough preparation. Before embarking on any translation, it is imperative to fully digest the source material and understand the author’s overarching goals. This deep comprehension is directly linked to our ability to relay the primary message both accurately and objectively. 

Another key insight is the importance of engaging with translation theory. Only with a solid theoretical foundation can we adeptly select and apply the right theoretical lens when confronted with various textual nuance. 

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