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could provide batch processing at remote locations. (7) It could do this through the use of teletype-writer terminals as output devices. (8) Unfortunately, the response time for remote batch processing is unpredictable. (9) It can vary form a few minutes to several hours.

 

 

我们可以简析一下该句子的长度、结构和句首的多样化。

从句子长度方面来看:(1)短句,9个词;(2)中等长句,12个词;(3)中等长句,11个词;(4)短句,4个词;(5)中等长句,14个词;(6)中等长句,14个词;(7)中等长句,13个词;(8)中等长句,10个词;(9)中等长句,10个词。

从句子结构的多样化方面来看:(1)简单句;(2)并列复合句;(3)简单句;(4)简单句;(5)简单句;(6)主从复合句;(7)简单句;(8)简单句;(9)简单句。

从句首的多样化方面来看:(1)名词短语(computerized system);(2)名词短语(the operating modes);(3)名词短语(conventional batch processing);(4)名词短语(the exception);(5)名词短语(batch processing);(6)名词短语(remote batch processing);(7)代词(it);(8)副词(unfortunately);(9)代词(it)。

由于中等长度的句子和简单句使用过多,例5读起来显得单调,语言也显得幼稚。应该承认,每个句子的意思很清楚,但是读者往往很难理解到单个句子所表达意思的连贯性。

 

 

改进后,可读性明显增强了:

Computerized system can operate in one of three modes: batch processing, remote batch processing, and time-share processing. Except for accessibility, conventional batch processing can meet all the design requirements; but it cannot provide output to diversified, remote locations in a timely manner. Remote batch processing, as the name implies, can provide batch processing at remote locations through teletype-writer terminals. Unfortunately, its response time is unpredictable, varying from a few minutes to several hours.

 

 

从上面的例析中我们可以看出,科学语体是说理性语言,是严谨推理和复杂思维活动的文字体现。

我们认为,从宏观上把握科学语体的语言风格,熟知科学语体在遣词、造句、语篇等方面的基本特点,对于提高科学论文的写作质量,具有重要的意义。

 

 

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