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关于terms和clause的区别；in reasonable ways和in a reasonable manner的区别
例：
采用格式条款订立合同的，提供格式条款的一应当遵
循公平原则确定当事人之间的权利和义务，并采取合理的
式请对注意免除或者限制其责任的条款，按照对的要求，
对该条款予以说明。
原：
Where standard terms are adopted in concluding a contract,
the party which supplies the standard terms shall define the rights
and obligations between the parties abiding by the principle of
fairness, request the other party to note the exclusion or restriction
of its liabilities in reasonable ways, and explain the standard terms
according to the requirement of the other party.
评：此段文有多处用词不当的地。
原文的“格式条款”，不能直接按字面出。中文的“条款”一词有两种含义，一是表示“条件、条款”，意为“规定”，二是表示合同法律文件中某一具体条款，例如第几条款，这里的“格式条款”应该属于后一种，因为合同有“格式条款”与“非格式条款”两种，而不是“规定”。因此，“格式条款”不能成 “standard terms”。 Terms (pl)意为conditions, provisions，比如“根据合同条件条款”我们应成：in accordance with the terms, conditions and provisions of the contract。
本条文里的“格式条款”应成 “standard clauses”。clause意为(legal) complete paragraph in an agreement, or legal document（法律），即“合同协议，法律文件的条款。”所以“合同第条款”应成Clause of the contract。
原文中的“合理的式”成 “in reasonable ways”不妥。way一般表示“ method”法，有时也表示 “condition, state, degree，（情形，状态及程度），比如“大规模地”可成in a big way。“合理的式”应成 “in a reasonable manner”。 manner 表示“式”（可数，通常作单数），比如“以这种式”可成“in this manner”。
此句可改为：
Where standard clauses are adopted in concluding and entering into a contract, the party supplying the standard clauses shall, under the principle of fairness, define the rights and obligations between the parties thereto, ask the other party, in a reasonable manner, to note the clause on the exclusion or restriction of its liabilities, and explain the standard clauses in accordance with the requirement of the other party.

关于revoke和rescind的区别
例：
合同无效或者被撤销后，因该合同取得的财产，应当予
以返还。
原：
The property acquired as a result of a contract shall be returned
after the contract is confirmed to be null and void or has been revoked.
原文的“被撤销”为 has been revoked，欠准确，应为rescind。按《牛津现代高级双解辞典》定义，revoke意为repeal, cancel, withdraw (a decree, consent, permission, etc)，即“废止，撤销，取消；宣告（命令，同意，允许等）无效”，例如“取消决定”可成revoke a decision，“撤销委托”可成revoke commission，“吊销执照”可成revoke a licence。
rescind意为legally repeal, annual, cancel (a law, contract, etc)即“（法律）废止，撤销（法规，合约等）”，例如“取消合约” 可成rescind an agreement，“废除法律”可为rescind a law.“废除不合理的规章”可为rescind the unreasonable rules，“取消判决”可为rescind a judgment。
根据上述定义，本句可改为：
The property acquired by either party as a result of a contract shall be returned to the other party after the contract is confirmed to be null and void or has been rescinded.

关于reject和refuse的用法；“负责任的人”与“负责人”的区别
例：
合同生效后，当事人不得因姓名、名称的变更或者法定代
表人、负责人、承办人的变更而不履行合同义务。
原：
After a contract becomes effective, the parties may not reject to
perform the obligations of the contract because of modification of the
title or name of the parties, or change of the statutory representative,
the responsible person or the executive person of the parties.原文中的“不得…….而不履行合同义务”为 “may not reject to perform the obligations of the contract”，是误，应将reject改为refuse。按《牛津现代高级英文辞典》，reject法律上意为refuse to accept即“拒绝，不接受，驳回”。比如，“不受理申诉”可为reject a complaint，“驳回证据”可为reject （a） proof,“驳回上诉”可为reject an appeal。refuse意为show unwillingness to accept (something offered),“拒绝，拒受，拒给，不愿”等意。例如，“不准保释；拒绝保释”可为refuse bail；“拒绝履行”可成refuse to 本论文由英语论文网提供整理，提供论文代写，英语论文代写，代写论文，代写英语论文，代写留学生论文，代写英文论文，留学生论文代写相关核心关键词搜索。